英语演讲比赛Myteacher
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英语演讲比赛 Myteacher
本文曾获得北京电视台、国家教育部举办的 My teacher 英
语演讲比赛优胜奖。在以“我的老师”为主题的演讲会上，这篇
演讲出人意料地将计算机称作自己的老师，以吸引听众的注意。
然后又用事实与推理证明计算机确实是一个“老师”，从而赢得
了听众的共鸣。某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下：
(1)在 every 后，territory 用复数，显然是错误的。另外，
表示“各个领域”，用 field 为好。
(2)原文时态用错了。
(3)concept 是可数名词。make 后的宾语补语如果是不定式的
话，要省略 to。另外，一般不用被动不定式，而只用过去分
词。deeply 也有中国式英语之嫌。
(4)help sb. (to)do，不用 doing。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I have had a lot of teachers in my school who have
given me much help in my study. For their help I will
never forget them. But today I am going to talk about a
special teacher of mine. This teacher is not a human
being and its name is“Computer”. It has been teaching
me a lot of knowledge and I appreciate it very much.
With the development of modern science and
technology, computers are widely used in every teritories
[every field](1) including education. How can a computer
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be my teacher? How does a computer teach me?
Multimedia(多媒体)helps a lot in this aspect in recent
years, and computer-based training (CBT) has become a
popular educational medium (手段). Even before the
multimedia come [came](2) up, many different learning
systems appeared, using the components and techniques we
now associate with the term “multimedia”. Multimedia
components, such as graphics (动画) , animations , sound
and video, make the learning process easier through
visualization. Animations can present many complex
subjects dynamically, but human teachers can not do this
on blackboards. Multimedia makes our study more lively
and interesting. For example, a CD-ROM disk named
“Encarta Encyclopedia” contains 650 MB information
including images, graphics, music clips, video clips,
animations , texts, hotwords, and database search
functions. Fields involved includes physical sciences,
performance arts, social sciences, politics, military,
education and so on. When pressing a button, I can hear
American President Clinton's speech clip. I may enjoy
playing all kinds of musical instruments in the world. I
can also see the animation of many physical phenomena.
This makes physical concept to be understood deeply
[ concepts understood better](3). The audio features of
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multimedia can greatly help me learning [learn] (4)
foreign languages. With its speech output capabilities,
I'm no longer dependent on an instructor for proper
pronunciation.
How can I interact with a computer? There are many
ways, including keyboard, mouse pointer, and touch
screen. I often use a keyboard. When I press right keys,
I can see and hear whatever I want. Information world is
at my fingertip. I wish that true speech input-output
system would be invented one day.
As teachers, computers have a lot of virtues： They
are positive, they have good memories and never lose any
information stored in them. They have much knowledge in
every field. They can let out all kinds of sounds, and
can also improve the efficiency of our study. For
example, if I want to, I can skip some chapters so that
I can study at my own pace.
Although computers will never take the place of human
teachers, they are welcomed by more and more learners.
Computers will continue to evolve(发展)with the aid of
modern technologies. Computers are so powerful, helpful
and important that everybody needs it, especially in
the future! I love my computer teacher!
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英语演讲比赛Myteacher本文曾获得北京电视台、国家教育部举办的Myteacher英语演讲比赛优胜奖。在以“我的老师”为主题的演讲会上，这篇演讲出人意料地将计算机称作自己的老师，以吸引听众的注意。然后又用事实与推理证明计算机确实是一个“老师”，从而赢得了听众的共鸣。某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下：(1)在every后，territory用复数，显然是错误的。另外，表示“各个领域”，用field为好。(2)原文时态用错了。(3)concept是可数名词。make后的宾语补语如果是不定式的话，要省略to。另外，一般不用被动不定式，而只用过去分词。deeply也有中国式英语之嫌。(4)help...
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