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MyDefinitionofSuccess
By Bao Jinlong(鲍金龙)
专家点评:演讲开头点题，直截了当，紧扣主题，语言较简
洁，运用修辞得体。
It is easy to describe success in terms of money,
fame and reputation. But I believe that success is not
external. I believe that success comes from within. My
definition of success is to be true to yourself, and be
true to others. That means, that you must cherish your
personal ideal even in the face of adversity. I also
believe that success is not discriminatory. Success is
not restricted to such a CLASS of people, in fact, it
may be achieved by any person irrespective of his race,
creed, gender and economic background. A good example of
success is that of Beethoven. He is one of the world's
most famous composers, yet he was deaf. He could not hear
the majestic pieces of music that he created. Yet, in the
face of this adversity, he was able to maintain his
ideals--that of composing music.
To exemplify what success means to me, I pose a
question to all of you. What brings us together here
today? I believe that it is the beauty of the spoken
word. The effect of pause and the sound of rhetoric are
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unique to the spoken word. I believe the beauty of the
spoken word is even stronger for those who have
difficulty in expressing themselves. These people are
reclusive and had their emotions hidden within them. I
once went to Australia and I saw two pictures, Once was
drawn by a normal child, the other was drawn by a child
with social inhibitions. The picture drawn by the normal
child was simple and plain. The other was life-like, full
of details and imagination. What this shows is that these
are ideas, emotions and feelings that are locked
internally in these
children.
My ideal is to be the key, spreading the beauty of
the spoken words to these children. These children have
been neglected, but I feel that I can and should help
these children to find themselves and be able to express
themselves.
I realize that this is a difficult task, and there
are many obstacles on the way. But I believe in my ideals
and I will stick to them--even in the face of adversity.
We should never have a premature abortion of ideals--let
the child, let our ideals, stand the challenge. For a
life without ideals is not living.
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Thank you!
译文:成功之我见
用金钱、名誉和声望来描述成功，这很简单。但我相信成功
不是外在的，我相信成功来源于自身。我对成功的定义是对已诚
实，待人真诚。这就意味着即使面临困境厄运，你都必须坚守自
己的理想。我同样相信成功没有偏见，成功不属于某一类人，事
实上，不论种族、宗教信仰、性别和经济背景，任何人都能够获
得。贝多芬的成功就是个很好的例子。他是世界上最著名的作曲
家之一，而他却双耳失聪。他无法听到自己创作出的美妙乐章。
然而，身
想象。这表明这些孩子的思想、情绪和感受都封闭在他们的
内心深处。
我的理想是成为向这些孩子传播话语世界美好的钥匙。这些
孩子曾被我们忽视，但我觉得我能够也应该帮助他们发现和认识
自己，并且能够表达自己的想法。
我知道这是个艰巨的任务，实现起来会遇到许多困难和障
碍。但我笃信自己的理想，并将坚守下去——即使逆境重重。我
们千万不能对一个理想作出不成熟的弃绝决定——让这些孩子，
让我们的理想经受挑战。因为，没有理想的生活是没有生气的。
谢谢!
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MyDefinitionofSuccessByBaoJinlong(鲍金龙)专家点评:演讲开头点题，直截了当，紧扣主题，语言较简洁，运用修辞得体。Itiseasytodescribesuccessintermsofmoney,fameandreputation.ButIbelievethatsuccessisnotexternal.Ibelievethatsuccesscomesfromwithin.Mydefinitionofsuccessistobetruetoyourself,andbetruetoothers.Thatmeans,thatyoumustcherishyourperson...
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